TV Receivers in Students Flats

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TVReceiversinStudents＇Flats

Nowadaysanincreasingnumberofstudents＇flatshaveTVreceiversinstalledinthem.TVpresentsavividworldinfrontoftudents.Boyscouldenjoysportsgamesatwill.Someprogramshelpstudentsrecharge(再充电)theirknowledgeandkeepthemabreastof(跟上)moderndevelopments.TVreceiversenrichtheirlearninglife.

Obviously,studentsarenotfreefromanytroubles.Somestudentsareaddictedto(沉溺于)TV.TVreceiversinsomeflatsarestillonlateatnightorneverturnedoffonweekends.SomestudentsspendmuchsparetimewatchingTVprograms,whichisseriouslyinterferingwiththeirresponsibilitiesatschool.Stillsomestudents＇eyesaregettingworse.

Inmyopinion,moderation(适度，适可而止)isthekeytoeverythingincludingwatchingTVprograms.IwouldnotremendthatstudentstrytoeliminateTVreceiverstotallyfromtheirflats.However,weneedtostrikesomekindofabalancebetweentheTVprogramsandschoolstudies.Learningtosuessfullymanagetimeatayoungagewilldefinitelypayoffinlaterlife.

范文分析  作者在本文结尾采用了作出总结的方法阐述个人看法，以规劝的口吻对学生提出忠告。在第二段引述个人看法时，常用inmyopinion,Ithink,Ibelieve,aordingtomyunderstanding,inmypersonaljudgment,IdefinitelyholdtheideathatmImaintainthatminmyviewminmyeyes等短语。